For sitcom writers who want honest, professional feedback and development
James will bring 25 years of professional sitcom-writing experience to your script and your development as a writer.
He will provide 5–6 pages of detailed notes on your script, followed up with a 90-minute one-to-one Zoom session designed to help you improve not only the script itself, but also your approach to writing, rewriting and developing future work.
Also included is the 14 Problems With Your Sitcom Script diagnostic tool so that you’re able to rewrite your script in advance of submission in order to maximise this development process.
Script read by BBC Sitcom Writer with 25 years of professional experience
5-6 pages of concrete sensible notes plus positive ways forward.
A private 90-minute one-to-one Zoom chat with James Cary
Free access to a 50 Page PDF '14 Problems with Your Sitcom Script'
Free access to Webinar replay on '14 Problems with Your Sitcom Script'
James Cary is an extremely experienced sitcom writer, having written over 100 episodes of half-hour comedy that’s been broadcast on BBC TV and Radio.
TV scripts include Miranda, Bluestone 42, My Family, My Hero, Citizen Khan, Almost Never, Dani’s Castle, Shakespeare and Hathaway and Death in Paradise.
Radio sitcoms in Think The Unthinkable, Hut 33, Elvenquest and ten series with award-winning comedian, Milton Jones.
James has read scripts and mentored for the BBC Writersroom and the National Film and Television School.
James has been great to work with. He has an infectious passion for script writing and sitcom particularly. He really helped me focus in on the story and the characters. There are often so many choices to be made when writing a script, but James offered insight, clarity and much needed encouragement. The notes and comments he provided really inspired me to want to work on the next draft and take it to a much better place. A script I could feel proud of.
Paul G., BBC Comedy Writersroom
What happens when I book?
You will immediately receive that PDF and Webinar replay - and can get to work fixing your script RIGHT NOW. I'll drop you a note to say 'hi' and check in. And we take it from there. Let's do this!
